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Thursday 18 April 2013

My Charge of the light birgade



The Charge Of The Light Brigade
 
Alfred Lord Tennyson
LI: to understand the story behind this narrative poem


Half a league, half a league,
     Half a league onward,
All in the valley of Death
     Rode the six hundred.
'Forward, the Light Brigade!
Charge for the guns!' he said:
Into the valley of Death
     Rode the six hundred.
'Forward, the Light Brigade!'
Was there a man dismay'd ?
Not tho' the soldier knew
     Some one had blunder'd:
Their's not to make reply,
                              There's not to reason why,
Theirs but to do and die:
Into the valley of Death
     Rode the six hundred.
Cannon to right of them,
Cannon to left of them,
Cannon in front of them
     Volley'd and thunder'd;
Storm'd at with shot and shell,
Boldly they rode and well,
Into the jaws of Death,
Into the mouth of Hell
     Rode the six hundred.
Flash'd all their sabres bare,
Flash'd as they turn'd in air
Sabring the gunners there,
Charging an army, while
     All the world wonder'd:
Plunged in the battery-smoke
Right thro' the line they broke;
Cossack and Russian
Reel'd from the sabre-stroke
     Shatter'd and sunder'd.
Then they rode back, but not
     Not the six hundred.
Cannon to right of them,
Cannon to left of them,
Cannon behind them
     Volley'd and thunder'd;
Storm'd at with shot and shell,
While horse and hero fell,
They that had fought so well
Came thro' the jaws of Death,
Back from the mouth of Hell,
All that was left of them,
     Left of six hundred.
When can their glory fade ?
O the wild charge they made!
     All the world wonder'd.
Honour the charge they made!
Honour the Light Brigade,
     Noble six hundred!


At the Battle of Balaclava in 1854 during the Crimean War, the ‘Light Brigade’, (a group of British soldiers), charged down a narrow valley to fight the Russian soldiers who had captured British guns. The Russians were at the end of the valley as well as on each side of it. The attack was not a wise choice and happened because of a misunderstanding of an order sent by the commander-in-chief. After following orders less than a third of these men survived.

Answer these questions in full sentences:

  1. “If you were in the military and you were given an order, would you obey it – even if it meant putting your life on the line?  Why or why not?” Yes we have to listen and we would have to fight.

  1. What is a brigade? Military elements.

  1. “Theirs not to make reply/Theirs not to reason why/Theirs but to do and die” - What did this mean for the soldiers? Her not allowed to answer back.

  1. What makes this a narrative poem? Its like a story instead of a poem.


Read the poem again and answer these questions about the language used:
LI: To explore the langu
age of a narrative poem

Stanza 1:
  1. What does the Valley of Death mean? Because most of the people died.
  2. Who is “he” in line 6? commanda
  3. What is the six hundred referring to? 600 soldiers


Stanza 2:
  1. Now that you see it in context, what does the line, “Theirs but to do and die” mean?  They killed their own selves.


Stanza 3:
  1. What weapons are used against the Light Brigade? Guns, Bombs,cannons
  2. What two things are personified here? Jaws of death / Mouth of hell


Stanza 6:
  1. Did the Light Brigade win or lose? Lose
  2. Are they seen as heroes? Yes


Use short answers to answer the following questions.
LI: To show that I am reading for meaning and understanding  
  1. About how many soldiers were in the Light Brigade? 600

  1. What weapons did they carry? saber) sword
 
  1. What weapons did they face? Guns and cannons

  1. Why did the Light Brigade charge? They were order to but it was a mistake

  1. How are the members of the Light Brigade survived at the end of the poem? Being honoured.




List 3 facts about the poet Alfred Lord Tennyson
Alfred Tennyson was born in Somersby, Lincolnshire, the fourth of the twelve children of George Tennyson, clergyman, and his wife, Elizabeth. His father’s father had gone against all tradition in making his younger son, Charles, his principal heir, and arranging for George to enter the ministry.

In 1816 (7) Tennyson was sent to Louth Grammar School, which he disliked so intensely that in later life he refused even to walk past the school. From 1820 (11) he was educated at home, mainly by his father, who introduced him to such works as The Arabian Nights, The Koran and other books of folklore and myth. He joined his brothers, Frederick and Charles, at Trinity College, Cambridge, in 1827 (18), and, with his brother Charles, published Poems by Two Brothers in the same year.


Tennyson published Poems in 1832 (23), having benefited from Hallam’s assistance in choosing and negotiating with the publisher, and in proofreading and editing the manuscript. The volume received generally favorable reviews, though Hallam continued to promote it, himself writing a review which appeared in Moxon’s The Englishman’s Magazine together with one of Tennyson’s sonnets.

My Reflection


Math Reflection

This term we have been learning our place value by using the Thousands and Millions house.

This term I have been doing basic facts on the mat and learning them.

This term it was my second time doing timelines and I've learnt how to do them by finding facts and answers and they need to be in chronological order.

My xtramath


Wednesday 17 April 2013

My WTWB


When the wind blows

I thought this story was really interesting to hear because it was telling me about things I've never heard before, and people dying  from a nuclear war.

The Labour herald said, “this book deserves a very wide audience and should be compulsory reading.”  I think that it should give more sad information about the bombing that is happening.

The guardian said,  “it is meant to break your heart to some purpose.”  I think  that its not really meant to break our hearts but care for them and feel sorry for what has happened in the story.

My Xtra math


My When the wind blows


When the Wind Blows
Story Elements

L.I. - Identify the factual elements of the story
Identify the fictional elements of the story

Look at these events and cut and paste them into the correct column in the table

FACT
FICTION
There was a cold war between former allies
Nuclear fallout can kill you after the bomb has gone off
England was afraid of a Russian /
American nuclear war
America is a democracy
There was a nuclear arms race
People believed in Mutually Assured Destruction
People built nuclear fallout shelters in case there was a war
People who wore patterned clothing got the pattern burnt into their skin
After WW2 Russian bombed England
The cold war has caused other conflicts
After WW2 Russian bombed England





Russia is a democracy
After 14 days you can leave the nuclear fallout shelter
A nuclear refuge (like the one in the book) would protect you
Cushions can protect you from nuclear fallout
A nuclear bomb causes a big flash of heat and light
The cold war has caused other conflict
The Russians let off a nuclear bombs







Thursday 11 April 2013

My xtra math


My Left behind on the beach


Left behind  on the beach:

Left behind on the beach:
Kids playing with the  smooth sparkly sand
which gets on them, everywhere
sandcastles sinking, as huge waves crash
them down recklessly.

Left behind on the beach:
Sitting on  beach chairs in the cheerfully glorious weather
watching the setting sun flowing down
birds flying to collect their food,
while treasured jewels are found.



Left behind on the beach:
Sam playing on his PSP and video games while
Mum and Dad are laughing,
adorable cousins Claire and Shane
puffing after having long races.


Left behind on the beach
Waves clashing, men fishing
boats speeding as lovely children
are swimming in the fresh water.














Thursday 4 April 2013

My Story grammar



Story Grammar

Rachel

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Setting
Characters
Themes and styles
Moral
Berlin
Poland
Farm
House
Prison
Bruno
Shmuel
Gretel
Father
Mother
Murder
Revenge
Love
Hate

Warning
that this should not happen again.

Events and Action
Bruno moves from Berlin
Bruno fell from the swing
Lieutenant Kotler harmed Pavel
Bruno and Shmuel meet
Bruno denies Shmuel as his friend
When Bruno sneaks off to the other side of the fence
Bruno dies from being gassed in the gas chamber.
The commandant realizes what has happened to Bruno in the end
Bruno’s Father gets killed by getting shot.

My xtra maths